Hello Readers. I have two entries for Carrot Ranch Fiction
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Last week, HERE, the challenge was to write a 99-word story about “nourish” – Here is my take:
Title: No Words Needed
Come in, tired one.
Sit down.
I see you are on your way south.
to the sea.
Your bed for the night
is there.
And Soup’s simmering on the stove.
Please leave it simmer
when you hit the sack.
“Thanks” replied the visitor.
As we left the room, I asked dad if he’d build into the guest – nourish his soul with faith talk or advice before his body was nourished from soup and sleep.
“No,” replied dad.
Sometimes words are not needed.
People are sometimes well nurtured by giving them space.
And love.
“Yes, dad….
many ways to nourish.”
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This week, HERE, we were invited to write a 99-word story that answered the question, “What’s the first thing that comes to mind when you are in absolute danger?” – My initial thought? It depends on the type of danger and so for my entry, I went with getting assistance when danger emerged – strength in unity… with a little twist
Title: Danger
Hands on the side of my head
Eyes shut Lightly
Body wound tightly
What to do?
What to do?
Grounded feet
Imagined roots
anchoring into the street
What to do?
What to do?
Tailbone down
Back strong
Head lifted high
Waiting
pondering
the next move
He followed me inside –
and has trailed my stride
too close for comfort
the smell of danger
emitted in the night air
with skin heated and heart beating a little faster –
quiet prayers form on my lips
Then….
I reached the female security guard.
“Need a walk out tonight?”
“Yes. That would be great.”
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Did you get my twist?
The security guard was a woman – yeah baby!
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Care to join in with the Carrot ranch 99-word Flash Fiction challenge?
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I did 🙂
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Thanks for reading
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I read you Nourish story at the Ranch. I like it – so many ways to nourish. The sense of impeding danger and growing fear is strong in your second story. Thank goodness for the security guard! Female or male, no matter. It’s the uniform that counts.
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You are so right – that uniform and the training – and we have seen a lot of Female security guards lately – wonderful too
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Thanks for the feedback on the fiction
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🙂
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I couldn’t come up with 99 words. On another site doing the challenge, I wrote – If I were in immediate danger, I’d probably wonder where the bathroom was!
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Haha
Very funny G!!!
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Yes! I did catch that the security guard was female. I also appreciated the practical ways the character grounded and made level-headed choices.
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Thank you so much
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I missed the security guard was a female – I was feeling the fear though and engrossed in that … I live 12 miles from Detroit and went to school and worked there for over three decades.
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Oh wow – that is close to Detroit ! InHe worked and lived in various areas
And just takes being mindful – making good choices – and getting a walk out sometime – ha
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Interesting. I am so clueless to danger I just react. I do love your engagement!💕☕️☕️🌺
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Thanks and sometimes a quick reaction is what is needed… ha
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I honestly love your short story and quaint, fun metaphors. Spontaneous is the call on this one. Ha!
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