Hello Readers,
The prompt this week is to write a short fiction piece about OLD WORLD CHARM. “It can be nostalgic or irreverent. You can invent an “old world,” return to migrant roots, or recall ancient times. Go where the prompt leads you!”
Here is my take:
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Title: Polka Pantomime
Fiction word count: 99
I saw her dancing, again, this Sunday
polka played from the radio
cabbage and meat aroma filled the air
the low heels of her shoes
clicked with certain cues
the dress, that covered most of her body, barely moved
while her shoulders sometimes grooved
soft face wrinkles
with eyes that twinkled
as her feet stepped side to side
doing some sorta polka slide –
and I, barely 13, stayed back
watching from the shadow
curious about this old grandmother of mine
as she traveled back in time
every Sunday
doing the Polka pantomime
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My fiction is based on my Grandmother
She danced the polka every Sunday and tapped into the “old world charm” whenever she could.

Speaking of food, have been wanting to show Joanne the Zucchini noodles we make with the “vegetable spiralizer” –
In closing…
here are two songs similar to what Grandmother would play and dance with on Sundays
I chose this short Polka song, Apples, Peaches, Pumpkin Pie, because Charli Mills featured such tasty details about food this week with the Pasty Fest in her area.
I chose this second short Polka instrumental for the Pennsylvania bloggers out there 🙂
Want more Polka?
Some history of the huge Polka festival in Wisconsin HERE
P R I O R H O U S E B L O G
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Oh I recognize those cabbage rolls 😀 They’re quite yummy when done properly.
The “I got to know the bitchy one instead” part brought a bitter sweet smile. Hmmm… I wonder why that sounds familiar… 😉 Anyway, I’m glad you caught glimpses of the nice grandma as well and have some sweet memories of her.
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Hi ana – and the bittersweet smile I get from knowing your stories – so familiar – eh? and glad we survived them and then thrived in spite of them
thanks for the comment
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What doesn’t kills us… 😉
On the upside, it was from my mean grandmother I learnt how to cook those cabbage rolls 😀
I got lost in the culinary story last time, I think, and I forgot to mention how I loved those sweet, evocative lines you wrote.
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thanks for coming back to add that – appreciate the feedback a lot.
and was just reading a section of “hard times” by Dickens and had to laugh when a character referred to his grandmother as that old “hag”
– and some folks – whether grandmother or not – just leave a nasty essence behind – eh?
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Oh… some people certainly do. 😉
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A lovely creation.
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thanks
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Nicely done, Yvette!
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thanks
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Hi Yvette,
When you have a chance, can you shoot me your email address? The last email you sent me disappeared and you’re not in the contacts.
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I will be in touch this weekend
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Polka music wasn’t something I grew up with but cabbage rolls were. I haven’t had a really good cabbage roll like my mom used to make in a VERY long time! Thanks for the memory.
I guess I’m a purist. I can’t think of a meat-based tomato sauce without pasta. I did however try zucchini ‘noodles’ with an oil-garlic dressing and it was delicious!
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Ji Joanne – well so glad you were able to try the zucchini noodles and liked them – we actually started not cooking them now (got the idea from a health mentor names Stee) and for us it works – but if you can still get away with having regular flour noodles – I say enjoy!
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So funny I was reading about rock music and polkas today 🙂
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what timing! and was it good reading? hope so
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Just a small Q and A thing. One song mentioned was Warren Zevon’s Mr Bad Example. Apparently there is a band from Texas Brave Combo who did lots of classics, Purple Haze, Stairway to Heaven etc in Polka style lol
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well thanks for sharing that….
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Well done, Yvette!
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thanks
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You’re welcome!
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Pig in the basket look great. Are they ready to eat (of course the meat is cooked) or they need to cook them somehow?
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Hi YC – I have never made them and so I am not sure – I think the meat is lightly cooked and then rolled – and then they are baked in the oven – 🙂
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Sounds good.
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Fond remembrances of Sophie fill this post – it is really enjoyable Yvette. The accordian is something I played for about three years and when we moved here in 1966, there were no music stores that had accordian lessons, so it sits in its case in the basement to this day.
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Oh Linda, how cool that you know how to play it and still have your accordion – my son has one – a child’s size one – and I think it is still in the attic in a bin. He only tinkered and played guitar instead ( ha) and I bet it was tough to find lessons – and that was before the days of YouTube or online teachers.
thanks for sharing and
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Yvette – my father was German and he insisted that the accordion would be my instrument to learn. I played better by ear than reading music, despite taking lessons for three years at the Ontario Conservatory of Music (we had a satellite music school in the town where I lived). We did some recitals and played at nursing homes around Christmas time. But yes, it reposes in its case downstairs and has for decades … here is a picture of me playing my full-sized accordion. We just rented a child’s accordion with 12 chord buttons and a smaller keyboard. Then when we mastered that, we moved on to a full-sized instrument and my parents bought that one. My pictures back in the beginning of my blog were very small as you will see. https://lindaschaubblog.net/2013/10/05/oktoberfest-not-your-wurst-nightmare/
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thanks for sharing the post = the photo fo you from 64 was wonderful and now I know the Lady of Spain song:
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Thanks Yvette – figured I’d give you a smile and just sent it to you on another comment.
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What an inspirational post, Yvette, and those cabbage rolls look delicious! Polka was not something I grew up with but I watched Lawrence Welk. Your flash is a beautiful tribute.
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Hi Charli – and as noted over at your place – your talk of food and then dancing really “primed” me for the content of this old world charm post –
and my grandmother Sophie watched Welk (and Hee-haw) so cheers to that 🙂
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Polka-dot… dot-dash-dot-dot dash!
See what the word has done to me!
Polka dot… that’s now stuck in my head!
Polka… dots…
Please give me a piece of bread…
polka dottti.. I flee
before you shoot me dead!
😵😁😲🤪🙃😄
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hahah – that was so funny – wishing you a good weekend AJ
🙂
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Deeply nostalgic. Well done.
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thanks
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